Tuesday, April 26, 2011

All I Asking For Is My Body, Part I, Dialogue

b.     Who is Makot?  Do you feel sorry for him?  What are your thoughts about him and the way he copes with his parents? 

Makot is was the "gang leader" for Kiyoshi, Nobuyuki and Mitsunobu. They were much younger group then Makoto but they looked up to him a lot. Makot felt comfortable hanging out with those kids rather than kids his own age because kids his own age would make fun of him. They would taunt him for how he acted or the way he talked but Kiyoshi pointed out that they were treating him that way because Makot always had money and they others did not. By hanging out with the younger kids, he never got treated less than, and those kids really looked up to him as a bigger brother. Someone that they can confide with and have a great time with.

Of course it is odd that he never wants to hang out with kids his own age which makes me think of other things as to why he is doing this. Is he doing this because he wants to gain their trust and then manipulate them to do anything he wants in order to continue to get the same benefits as before? i.e. the chow fun, movies, candy etc... Or is he really doing this to get away from something that he does not want to share with others? The only other questionable thing that came up was the fact that his parents were never present most of the time until the very end of this section where you finally meet Makoto's mother for a brief moment.

A lot of things came across the this first section that just made you question the relationship Makot had with this younger kids and made me question just as much as Kiyoshi did to his parents as to why he was not allowed to hang out with Makoto any longer. That just brought back a lot of memories of when I was a child and being told who I could or could not be friends with. My parents never gave me a straight answer but just I could not and that I should respect what they say as they are my parents. I hated that so much but they eventually understood that they can not choose who I can be friends with and I can befriend anyone I wanted to and that I would sooner or later learn if that person would be a good person to have in my life. Maybe that is Kiyoshi's parents are trying to teach him, that Makot is not the greatest person to have as a friend and that he will understand at a later time but for now they are trying to protect him from harm that may be coming his way if he were to continue this friendship.

Also, since Makot's parents weren't properly introduced in the first section, you are left to wonder who exactly they are and what it is that they do that made Kiyoshi's parents comment negatively about them? They did not specify exactly what it was that made Makot's parents bad but just the way that they presented it with such secrecy made you think more and eventually find out for yourself. Since his parents weren't around that much, he probably took advantage of that by having them give him money when he wanted it and befriended those kids so he wont feel alone and do things that he might of wanted to do with his parents. Maybe he was just trying to fill a void for his parents working so much throughout the day. We shall soon find out more...

6 comments:

  1. Hi Jaime,

    Kiyoshi is the narrator, and so one of the reasons we don't know exactly what Makoto's mother does is based on Kiyoshi's reluctance to say it. He only gives clues. Kiyoshi writes it in a way that probably mirrors the way people in the community talked about them. Makoto's parents are "bad people," but no one will say exactly why because they're too polite; everyone is left to figure it out on their own.

    Thanks for your insights.

    Take care,
    Lauren

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  2. Jamie:
    This story was interesting the way it lead us to believe something but yet imagine it the way we wanted to.
    Kiyoshi is definitely stuck between the old ways and the birth of new generations of Americans of Japanese and he want to discover his own role in the world.
    I think its interesting to see the concept of being left to figure things out on their own the same way we are today and are in this story....
    YOu offered great insight into different parts of the story...thanks for the reading Daye

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  3. Jamie,

    I enjoyed your dialogue of the story. You are right that it was very interesting how at the end of the story they left it wide open as to how Makot's parents were "bad people". I had all sorts of bad thoughts of what his mom might be doing especially since they had a lot of money. It definitely gets your mind wandering as to who and what Makat's parents were all about. Thanks for your reading.
    Dina

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  4. Hi Jamie,

    I also found myself asking a lot of the same questions while reading this part. I agree with you on thinking that maybe Makot had some alternitive motive. I thought that him and his whole family were suspisous.I would like to know more about Makot and his family.

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  5. I agree that when you talked about obeying your parents. It is something that we all usually do when growing up and when we are young. I always remember my mom would tell me I couldn't hang out with a particular friend and it really made me confused. I wasent sure why but i figured that it was for the best so I went along with it.

    Thanks for your ideas.
    -Callie

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  6. I too want to know more about his parents. They left a little mystery there so we would want to keep reading. Maybe Makot's father is a plantation foreman and thats why some folks don't really like them at least that was the vibe I got. The foremen werent liked very much because the workers were forced to work in bad conditions in debt and hunger.

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